Why Your Video Ads Aren’t Converting — And How to Fix Them
- Kyle Benjamin
- Jun 20
- 2 min read

If you're spending time and money making video ads, they better be doing one thing: converting.
But for too many business owners, they’re not.
Maybe your views are high, but sales are flat. Maybe your CTR is abysmal. Or maybe you’re getting leads that ghost. If any of that sounds familiar, this post is for you.
At BirdDog Creative, we specialize in high-performing video content — and we’ve seen the same few mistakes wreck otherwise solid ad campaigns. Here’s what to look out for and how to fix it.
🚩 1. Your Hook Isn’t Hooking
The first 3 seconds of your video determine whether someone keeps watching. If you open with a slow pan, your logo, or a generic greeting…you’ve already lost them.
Fix it:Start with tension. A bold claim. A problem they feel in their gut. Your first line should punch — not pander.
Example:❌ “Hi, I’m Sarah and I make candles.”✅ “Your favorite candle brand is ripping you off — here’s why.”
🚩 2. It’s All About You (And Not About the Viewer)
Too many ads are focused on what you do. But people don’t buy features — they buy solutions. If your video script sounds like a resume, it won’t convert.
Fix it:Lead with the transformation. Talk about the problem, paint the ideal future, and make your offer the bridge.
🔥 Pro Tip: Start every script by writing your customer’s internal monologue — then script the ad as the answer to that pain.
🚩 3. Your CTA Is Weak or Missing
Even the best ad falls flat if you don’t tell people what to do next. “Check out our website” isn’t enough. Your CTA needs clarity and urgency.
Fix it:Use one strong, action-oriented CTA tied to the pain point. Bonus points if you say it out loud in the video.
✅ “Book a call today and let us take content creation off your plate — so you can focus on running your business.”
🚩 4. Your Creative Doesn’t Match the Platform
What works on YouTube won’t work on Instagram Reels. If your visuals are too polished or the pacing feels like TV, it’ll look out of place in a native feed.
Fix it:Match the vibe. UGC-style edits, captions that move, fast pacing, and raw energy outperform “commercials” every time — especially on Meta and TikTok.
🚩 5. You’re Running the Same Ad for Too Long
Even the best-performing ad creative has a shelf life. Algorithms fatigue. Audiences do, too. If performance is tanking, it's not always your targeting — it's often your creative.
Fix it:Rotate your hooks, test multiple scripts, and build 2–4 variations per campaign. At BirdDog, we shoot enough in a single session to give you creative ammo for weeks.
The Bottom Line
If your video ads aren’t converting, it’s not just bad luck. It’s a creative problem — and creative is what we do best.
Whether you’re a founder tired of DIY content or a growing brand ready to scale, BirdDog Creative builds video-first marketing that performs. No fluff. Just results.
Ready to stop wasting money on underperforming ads?
Book a strategy call and let’s fix your content from the inside out.



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